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NOT THE WEAK HEARTED. INCLUDES INCEST AND SEX. DONT LIKE IT GET OUT

FOR THE REST OF YOU ENJOY.


The sound of an alarm clock breaks the silence, prompting the two spa ponies to wake up.

"A new morning and a new day to be working at the spa." Aloe says in a soft voice to herself.

"Morning Aloe," pipes Lotus in a cheerful mood.

"Morning Lotus. Are you ready for another great day working at the spa?"

"As ready as I will....."  Lotus's stomach starts to growl, cutting her off mid-sentence. "Uhh, Aloe can we get some breakfast before we go work today?"

"Yes Lotus, but eat quick; we have a very busy schedule for today."

"Ok."  She says lovingly. While Lotus leaves to the kicthen to grab something to eat, Aloe heads to the receptionist's desk at the front, waiting for the customers.

Hours go by without a single customer coming to the spa.

"Hmmph....why aren't there any customers today?" Aloe groans, keeping her head down looking at the door.

"Aloe.....Aloe...." Lotus calls out, but gets no reply. An idea comes to her, and she grins slyly.

"HEY ALOE!" she yells attempting to scare her sister. Aloe jolts up and begins freaking out, looking about ready to sprint.

"Who..huh...what?" she mumbles, confused.

"Aloe, I think we should close down. We've been open all day and not a single customer has been here yet."

"Yeah, I guess you're right. No pony has come in all day today, not even our best customer."

"Sooooo then, I guess you know what this means." Lotus says with a big smile.

"Uhh… No?" Aloe says, still confused about the whole ordeal.

"Ughh I thought you would have caught this already." Lotus takes a deep breath and yells, "LET'S HAVE A SPA DAY!"

She waits patiently, excited to hear what her sister would say.

"You know what Lotus? That seems like a good idea… I guess," Aloe replies, puzzled as to why her sister wanted to have a day to themselves, but seeing that no one has come in all day, she regresses.

Why Not? We need a day like this every once in a while... Not that we get one every day.

"What the hay, sis. Let's have a day all to ourselves."

Lotus hearing this gets excited to hear her sister say those words. "YAY WE GET A SPA DAY ALL TO OUR SELVES!"
"Ok,ok settle down. Before we get anything done we need to close the spa. I'll go close up the front. What are you going to do?"

"Don't worry, I'll show you when you get back." Aloe is curious to what her sister has planned, but gets to work closing the spa. She goes off to the front of the spa to lock the door and close the blinds on the windows.

"Hey Aloe, its ready," Lotus calls out to her sister.

"What's ready?"

"Get over here and I'll show you."

Aloe hurries over to where Lotus is in a heartbeat to see what she had gotten ready. Hearing her sister's voice calling out to her, she soon finds herself at the sauna, on and in full blast. As soon as she opens the door the steam from the sauna shoots out like a gusting wind.

"Hey Lotus, where are you?" she calls out to her sister. All of a sudden the door slams shut, and the light leaves the room making it harder to see.

"Hey sis you're starting to scare me."Aloe says in fear, but is then tackled to the ground by her Lotus.

With Lotus' hooves pressing down on all of Aloe's hooves, Aloe finds herself unable to move and feels defenseless as her sister holds her down.


"Lotus, what are you doing? Is this some kind of joke?"  she says, still afraid of what Lotus might do to her. Aloe watches Lotus' silhouette getting closer, until finally she lays a soft kiss on Aloe's lips.

Aloe blushes, cheeks going cherry red. Unable to speak, she moans, trying to say something but instead just takes the kiss, feeling weird about her sister kissing her - but she doesn't want it to stop either.
Lotus finally stops the kiss, moving her muzzle back, a bridge of saliva still connecting the two of them.

"Uhhh Aloe, sorry! I dont know what came over me." Lotus says, realising what she has done. She starts to back away from her sister, keeping her head down in shame, and move to a corner where she begins to tear up."I'm so sorry Aloe, I just couldn't control it anymore."

Aloe, seeing her sister in pain, decides to walk towards her sister. Lotus looks up with wide, teary eyes, confused and scared about what Aloe might do to her. Aloe kisses her, and Lotus' cheeks become crimson red. She doesn't question it; it's already been answered.


Aloe feels their tongues dancing in their muzzles, and breaks the kiss.

"You know sis, let's try something a little different."  Aloe throws her sister down on her back and starts to move a little lower, licking Lotus' fur on the way down, until she got to her nether regions.

She licks the pink caves of her marehood, making Lotus moan harder with every licking, the sensation of Aloe's organ touching the soft tissue of her marehood. Lotus, unable to hold her nectar, shakes as an orgasm hits her, while Aloe licks every drop of her sister's love juice.

Aloe, also wanting some pleasure, stands up to move her rear into Lotus's face.

Lotus begins to lick Aloe's marehood, making it wet with the passion of their love making. There seems to be no end in sight for the twins.

After more than an hour inside the sauna the door finally opens. The hot, soothing mist of the sauna pours out in a blanket of fog until the twins come out, tired, hooves aching, their minds still in the ecstasy of the their transcendence, and extremely exhausted. The two sisters, feeling they can't walk for more than a minute, decide to just lay down on the spa beds in the massage rooms, both looking at each other with their eyes as they came closer to sleep.

They look at each other with a smile on their faces.
THE END
:iconarcticfox501:
finally my second story of aloe and lotus and no its not the second chapter just another story with better writing.

i give all credit to :iconmidnight-specter: for proofreading and rewriting it. thanks dude your the best *brohoof*
even if he still rewrote 11 words i still give equal or more credit to him.

Chapter 2:[link]
NOT FOR THE WEAK HEARTED INCLUDES INCEST AND SEX.

EDIT: WTF did i write. lol my other stories are better than this. ughhh dont worry this will be fixed for everypony to actually give it a worth and come to think about it, its to short. lol my requested stories are longer than this. ow well this will be edited and senseless stuff will be deleted and rewrote.
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~ArcticFox501 Apr 15, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks :)
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~GiromCalica Mar 29, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
And then it rained carrots
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~ArcticFox501 Mar 29, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
yeah....lol
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~GiromCalica Mar 30, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Sex jokes are okay, but don't overuse it, ok?
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~ArcticFox501 Mar 30, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
ok
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Mood: Neutral ~GiromCalica Mar 30, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Please, enough of this sex stories and stuff

You see, back in the old days we listen to beautiful soothing music of violins, cellos, violas, pianos, harps, trumpets, trombones, and many other stuff. The beautiful music made by Beethoven, the music they made is beautiful, unlike today, which contained your damn shabby money, drugs, sex, sad romance and many more things I find horribly bad. Many cartoons today are not like before; Back in the old times, there's many fighting and shooting, and violence, and today, oh, just today, there's nothing but numbers, colors, unnecessary giggling over nothing, and other too childish things. The bible is no longer used on most cartoons, because of its violent, Godly contents. But before that, people use the contents of the bible for stories...

UGH, ENOUGH OF THIS OLD AND NEW STUFF. Just stick to "Brotherly love", not sex. Just make these two ponies like they're siblings.

Stick to the 1930's.
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~ArcticFox501 Mar 30, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
i tried my mind didnt let me and i do as much enjoy the old ways as much as anyone else, in fact one of my favorite singers of all time has to be frank Sinatra and dean martian but its good to embrace the past but dont stick around to long or you might get left behind.
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~GiromCalica Mar 31, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
If I were a monarch I'd design everything like how it looked like in the Victorian Era.

yeah, I still stick with the future though, like this game called Submachine 6: The Edge. It looks futuristic due to the computers, but it was made during the years between 1901-1909.
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